Opening 1
Ali dribbled pass his opponents gracefully. He runs down the right flank, using his football skills to evade every attempt at tackling him. After beating the last defender with a series of step-overs, Ali came face to face with the goal keeper, Ali starred viciously at the goalkeeper and kicked the ball as hard as he could, the ball flew….
Opening 2
John swiftly rushed to the closet and locked the door. He crawled into a corner of the room and stood there shaking in fear. He looks out the small crack at the door. A silhouette of a man walking closer to the door was what he saw. Fear started to race through his veins. Suddenly his hand phone rang….
Opening 3
Sally saw a parcel under the seat of the train. She started to get suspicious. Could it be a bomb? Feeling very unsecured, Sally gets of the train. She squeezed into the congested stairway down. Suddenly a huge explosion was heard…
Opening 4
I held the gun upright, pointing it directly at the robber. He froze, stood rooted to the ground. He dropped my wallet and ran off swiftly towards the other direction, I felt relieve and lowered my arms. As the robber ran towards the road, a shot was fired, but it wasn’t me; the robber fell….
Opening 5
Opening 6
The rain poured down heavily as I raced down the hill on my bicycle. I was running out of time. As I made a sharp turn into a narrow alley, I lost control of my steer, I panicked
Opening 7
I ran home as fast as I could after receiving a distressed call from my brother. As I arrived, I saw my front door ajar. My heart sank a little when I saw a trail of blood leading into the main hall. I followed it. The trail continued into my room. I opened the door. What I saw next haunted me until this day…..
Opening 8
I swiftly ran through the names on the list. I saw the name I needed and quickly took down his particulars. As I was about to leave the office I broke into, the lights went off, and a voice whispered to me from the back…
Opening 9
I was waiting anxiously for my results. I sat there nervously for my teacher to retrieve my result slip from her table. She returned shortly later with a pinch of disappointment on her face after taking a quick glance on the slip of paper she was holding. I took the paper….
Opening 10
I waited patiently in the bushes. My arms soared a little but I was focused. My target was in range. I rested my finger on the trigger and waited for a clear cut opportunity to fire. As I was about to shoot…
Opening 11
There was only four seconds left in the game. I received a defence splitting pass from my team mate. I caught the ball firmly in my hands. Three seconds left on the clock. I jumped and took a snap shot. Many fingers were crossed as the ball headed towards the basket. I looked anxiously…
Opening 12
It was my first time doing the bungee. I looked down nervously at the terrain below. I slowly walked in the platform. Not letting the past noises getting the better of me, I mustered all my courage….
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Your openers are quite interesting but all in all, a little long. Number 3 is my favourite because of the variety of possibility is has for a story and Number 12 is my least favourite because it holds no other possibility for a story other than one about a person’s first time bungee experience.